Buisness trip
Dear Mr.
Rodriguez
The reason
for this email is to let you know that I am so grateful for the good room
service I had during the visit in Monterrey and the people who was available to
move me during this time. However, this visit was so useful to me because I am
going to live in Monterrey for the next few years. In the meantime, I would be grateful if we
can fit another visit but this time in New York, could you like to visit us
during July 25 to 27?
Sincerely
your
Aracely Serna
Good, Aracely! Just two comments: the use of 'HOwever' is not appropriate in this email because you are not contrasting ideas. In this case you can substitute with 'Moreover' or nothing .... second, the closing is 'Sincerely yours, ' including the -s and the comma.
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